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    Thanks in advance for your comments and suggestions.
    Nikon D90; 1/400sec; AP; f/4; ISO 200; 300 mm

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    Hi Lady Mirenchu,
    I like the relaxed pose and the fine details...the framing of your young tiger is spot on...I am going to issue you a citation for the head angle and eye contact, patience would have been the solution in this case, since he was moving his head every now and then. I would also consider boosting the saturation and contrast just a tad to make him pop out...looking forward to your next one...:):cool:

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    I like it as presented, the open mouth looks neat and love seeing those massive paws !!!

    PS wise I'm sure you could tweak the color a bit, would run a smoothing brush over the dark bg and desaturate the green just a bit !!! Like it a lot, difficult to come up with good one in the zoo !!!

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    Thank you for the comments! I corrected as you suggested and it looks much better, but I don't know if I over did it...thanks again!

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    The saturation and contrast boost is just right...:cool:

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    Excellent fur details, nice clear eye and the open mouth with sticking out tongue is a big plus. I like the L shape of the structure, helps frame the subject nicely. The repost does have the tiger stand out more but I think you might over desaturate the green which make the background a little uninteresting. Also a line going across in the background distracts a bit too.

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    Thank you Mr Thanaboon for your suggestions. This is the new corrected version of the image.

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    Hi - Agree with all of the above - good advice... Is it just my eye's or does this have a blue cast. The white area's of the fur look to be blueish on my screen.
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    Thank you Lance, I think I've fix it!!!

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    here is repost , OP has strong blue cast , desaturated blue channel
    let me know how it looks ,

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    Harshad, It looks good!

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