Hi Ursula,
This is a lovely action shot and you have beautiful feather detail and sharpness. As the left side is slightly clipped I might be tempted to crop the right side a little tighter just to balance out the composition. The white might be a little hot, but I'll leave that to one of the experts!
Best,
Nicki
I like the palm perch, and the interaction is good too. I like the pale blue colouring if the sky. Excellent wing-up pose. I find the comp tight - the bird at left has clipped feathers, and the one at right clipped toes...the square frame confirms this is a crop so perhaps you have a bit more room to add back? Yes, the whites on the incoming heron's throat are burnt.
Thank you for your comments. I did crop this shot a bit much. I think I was trying to eliminate some of the foreground. I'm not sure how to correct the "burnt" look of the incoming Heron's whites.
Love it. These landing at the nest shots are great. Good exposure, sharp, background and good eyes on both birds, hard to get when there are two. I can even excuse the meger at the left for the overall feel of this image.
I agree with the cropping comments above, but you did a great job on feather exposure and very sharp to boot. The whites are a bit burnt, but if you let people know which software you are processing in, someone can give you a very quick explanation on how to take care of the burned whites. Mayb be a simply adjustment on the histogram (recovery).
Love it but for the clipped toes and the too-tight left side. For info on handling the whites there are several threads in Educational Resources that will help. Just look at the titles and you will figure it out which ones will help
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