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    This is pretty much full frame. With some water cropped from the right for comp.
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    Had a reflection in the lower part of the eye, did some work on it to try to make it look more natural and a lot of beak clean-up.
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    Hi Jackie, I like the intimate close-up you've created here. Good job on the bill clean-up too. Great curve of the neck!! Comp-wise: I would crop from above to eliminate the triangle in ULC. It would solidify the top area, and would also make it seem like a deliberate cut above the head rather than looking accidentally clipped.

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    lovely image with nice exposure
    TFS

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    Agree with DC on the crop, loved the expo and details here, congrats..

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    Hi Jackie,
    Beautiful close-up and definitely agree with Daniel that a crop from the top would strengthen the comp. Love the water droplets!
    Best,
    Nicki

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    Great work Jackie. I echo Dan's suggestion about crop. Looks odd this way. :)

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    Nice soft light, details and pose. +1 re the crop. JR

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