Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Exposure program Manual
ISO speed ratings ISO 400
Date/time original 07/09/2008 07:465
Shutter speed value 1/200 s
Aperture value f/4
Metering mode Partial
Focal length 300 mm
I found this photo when I was arranging my photo-archive, I hope you like it, but anyway I would be happy to get some C&C...
Cheers,
Boris Belchev :D
Lovely capture, nice feeling, serene. The 'brush strokes" in the water are charming.
I agree with Harshad.
I felt the dark bank on the left overpowered the bird, and that he is too small in the frame. So recropped it, sharpened the birds head a bit, brightened the image a bit.
A very different look, but just an option for you.
I like the environmental feel on this one. Lovely colors and reflection. I don't mind the urc as I feel it balances out the image. I might crop some off the left though to decenter the bird.
This is very nice Boris. whilst cropping as mentioned, is subjective and the artists choice, the repost had enhanced the image allowing more emphasis on the elements that are attractive. Nicely done and thanks for sharing.
I like Randy's comp, but it does become a rather substantial crop if you ever decide to make a large print. Another option is to keep it horizontal but crop above just enough to hide the OOF black stuff above left, and then a bout half of the space behind the bird as most of it is just a dirty clump. I would also fix the white streak on the reflected eye. Otherwise excellent surroundings - I love the water and all the fine-streaked ripples.
I tried looser crops, very similar to what you mentioned, but at least with our small web sized images, the bird was so small, not much impact for me. In a big print, a looser crop would probably fly.
I too like the original post best. It is hard to get a good "small bird in habitat" image that really works well--and I think yours succeeds exceptionally well. In your image the dark at the top and upper right of the frame seem to balance the the dark vegetation at the left side of the frame. The reflection of the bird and the swirling pastel yellows, browns and greens in the water really take it over the top. I don't feel that the small bright leaf and reflection in the upper right are distracting at all. It is probably only distracting to people who have been "trained" to look for this type of stuff. These people need to study the photographs of the Frans Lantings, Jim Brandenburgs, Tom Mangleson's etc.. (IMHO). Your image is diifferent (in avery positive way) than most kingfisher images that I have seen.