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    Default Red Ranunculus

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    Thanks in advance for your comments and suggestions.
    Nikon D90; Shutter Speed 4.0 sec; AP; f/25; ISO 100; 60 mm

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    I like this. But I would be tempted to leave more room at the top though.

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    Hi - Another example of more is less!! Simple and effective.
    I might just take a little from the bottom and add a little to the top.
    Like it a lot!

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    Thank you very much Desmond and Lance for your suggestions. I corrected it, please let me know if this version is better.

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    Very nice Mirenchu. The repost is much better....... However, you need to fix the cloning in the upper right, you can see the line between the original and the extended canvas. Congrats on a keeper.....

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    beautiful colors! nice details in the petals and leaves! very nice image. well done, Mirenchu!

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    Hi Lady Mirenchu,
    I like your second repost, I would recommend on eliminating the bottom leaves and bud to just leave your flower alone, simple and beautiful...the bottom foliage takes away from her beauty...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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    Thanks again! Here is the corrected version, please let me know if this is better.

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    Excellent...no more, no less...:):cool:

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    What a lovely image, especially the first repost. I hesitate to offer an alternate view to that of Gus - in my mind he's the Master of Detail - but I personally like the leaves in the composition. I love all of your images, Mirenchu; I hope to see many more.

    Bill

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