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    Dave Barnes
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    Captured at my practice range, the local University sports grounds.


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    Good job with the whites with the dark BG. The stick is a nice bonus. Excellent wing positions. IMO the reflection is a little weak, and for that reason you could consider a pano crop with about 1/2 to 2/3 of the reflection cropped out. I would also eliminate the small light patch above the bill (that patch also has a horizontal clone mark in it).

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    Daniel is this better. The patch has been patched.:D (It was were I added canvas, sloppy PP:o)

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    A Daniel said you controled whites nicely on dark BG , repost is awesome ,
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    Really good shot Dave. Repost take sit up a level.

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    I like the composition of the repost much better and would selectively sharpen the head some more.

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    I like the action you captured and think that the wing positions are very nice. Good sharpness and the repost does look better.

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    Excellent detail superbly captured Dave
    Chris Kotze

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    Thanks Harshad, Dave, Axel, Denise and Chris, your comments are appreciated.

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    Hi Dave, your practise range is paying off. Well timed for the low swoop, and I like the trailing droplets from the feet. Good forward wing position, and I agree, taking off the bottom will work. ( still without a PC ) Cheers.

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    Thanks guys, your comments/advise is appreciated.

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