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    Rohan Kamath
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    Default Syke's Lark |India


    EOS Canon-40D
    Sigma 70-300mm APO(Non-IS)
    f/8
    ISO-250
    1/1000 sec.
    -0.3 EC
    Pattern Metering
    Aperture Priority
    AWB

    All C&C welcome and most appreciated(Especially on how to improve).
    -Cheers,
    Rohan

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    Rohan i really impressed with all the shots you have. you are doing extremely well and having a good knowledge and so can get nice close to the birds. congrats on this buddy.

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    The oof bg is beautiful and the little flower adds a good balance. I might try to clone out that bit of rock behind the bird's neck and that speck of white below its belly.

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    it could use a little more USM, but the light, pose, comp and anlge are very nice.
    Congratulaitons!

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    I like the raised crest, setting and BG and only wish the rock behind the bird were not there. I might also lighten the shadow of the bird a bit.

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    Thanks for the valuable inputs everyone... I'm very new to PP and honestly suck at it... I did try to clone out the rock behind the bird but failed miserably... Hope that eventually I'll learn to do that... Thanks for the encouraging words... :D

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    Rohan, The raised crest is nice and the BG colors are beautiful, and the flower balances the comp.

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    Rohan, excellent composition with that beautiful raised crest and the flower. Love that light and colors. I probably would have preferred without the border. But that is a personal preference. TFS.

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    Wonderful image with nice compositional balance and super warm tones. excellent HA on the Skylark. The cloning is easy in this instance for the bird has nice clean edges. I attached it for you, I used a hard brush to clone. 10-second job really in this case. Get to work mate. ;)

    well done overall. :)

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    Rhoan lovely head turn and raised crest on this bird. The single flower balances the image well. I do like Akos' cloning work although it's always a matter of personal taste.

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    @Ákos

    Thanks a lot for the advice on cloning. It does look much better now without the rock there...
    :D

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    lovely head turn and raised crest with beautiful BG
    Akosbhai , VWD here
    TFS

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    here is what i thought of.

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    Superb repost by Mital

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    loved the repost Mital...Thanks... could you please add what all changes you've made other than the cloning?? the bird seems to stand out much more...how did you manage that??

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    hi rohan,
    I've worked on selective based.
    i took off bird and separated the bg and did cloning work.
    then applied some USM to bird and NR to bt.

    finally did some toning work (Curves) few point overall.

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