Ahhh...I think it would be better if we could see more details of the bird. Still, Jeff, overall I don't think this one works for me. But I could be missing something here :)
Hi Jeff - love that wingspread.... I also find myself wanting to see more detail in the bird - the shilloutte looks out of place here, maybe if the wings were clear of the railing and you crop a heap from the RHS (To were the 2nd post from the left is)
To me the silhouette would be better if you focus more on the bird. The railing is too bright and big that it distracts the silhouette. Like what you are trying to do here, the wing span sure going to make one great silhouette picture.
Hi Jeff,
I like what you were trying to do...I agree with the advise given, I would try to get better definition on your bird, looking forward to your next one...:cool:
Hey Jeff, did you have more of these, because it says (8) I have to agree with the comments above. Wishe the sky had a different color if you where doing a silhouette:). TFS
Life In The Lot (8)
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