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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Maybe it's my most recent Yellostone trip and lack of sleep or when I look up and see all those stars I do have a chance to reflect....my 2nd ever poem......maybe it's just the fact that I realized that I need glasses......not an easy day for a guy with 20/10 vision.

    I did post this image in landscapes....but felt that it works with the words.

    Life


    I have lived
    So I thought
    Looking back
    Few regrets
    Certain answers
    Life's miss-steps
    Arrogant youth
    Age reflects
    Common foibles
    Wisdom tempers
    Lurking nightmares
    Life's rewards
    Final thoughts
    Sincere beliefs
    Lingering doubts
    Peaceful yield
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    Roman, The image really helps deliver the words. Very thoughtfully done. I like the way you've made me feel as though I've walked in your shoes for a moment. Excellent!

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    Roman, I love the last four lines of this poem. LOVE THEM. My goodness but this is good stuff for a beer drinking head banging guy's guy. ;):D;)

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    Your poem is a spiritual journey from many places, including discord, to a state of peaceful acceptance.

    This image clearly means a lot to you, in more ways than one.

    Beautifully done, Roman.

    Are you sure you're from Jersey?

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    Wonderful, Roman. I like the progression.

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    So there is a thinking man beneath that beer swilling exterior:).
    Well said, killer image.

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    Quote Originally Posted by James Shadle View Post
    So there is a thinking man beneath that beer swilling exterior:).
    Well said, killer image.
    He , he, he:D.....somtimes I like to surprise! Thanks all!

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    I was quite taken aback myself by the depth of your beer. Err, poetry! ;) Exceptional piece Roman.

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    Roman, this is an incredible image, with some very thougtful lines. The words certainly have plenty of relevance for me. I too still have 20/10 vision for distance, but I now need those #$%@* readers for close work! Very nice work.

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