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    Default wing span



    D700
    70-200mm f2.8 VR with 1.7TC
    340mm
    ISO 800
    f7.1 at 1/2500s
    Aperture Priority mode
    Matrix Metering
    -0.3EV
    Auto white balance
    handheld

    Adjust curve to lighten a bit, lighten the eye, run nosie reduction, crop and sharpen.

    Went to experiment flash on crow today, saw some pelicans flying by and caught one with wing span.

    All comments and suggestions are welcome.

    Hmmm, seem like there is a color cast, will try to fix that and repost later.
    Last edited by Thanaboon Jearkjirm; 09-26-2009 at 10:57 AM. Reason: color cast

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    repost, adjust WB and brighten up a bit

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    Nice, love the wing span, and the detail in the wings. can't wait to see your crow:)

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    Thanaboon, Nice capture of wing span at full extension, and cropped to accentuate it. Repost looks good, but I will be interested in what the gurus say about the dull BG, which sort of matches the color of the bird.

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    Hi - Looks like the original is a tad under exposed - I would go and set a black point and a white point in P.S. - might also worth changing the white balance of the RAW to cloudy and see what that gives you.
    As presented it is a little flat - lacking some contrast - the head area looks a little soft on my screen - some more DOF might have been in order.

    Love the wingspan!!!!!

    Repost if you make some more changes.

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    Nice full wingspan, in this case I would have gone with +0.3 or even +0.7EV. The sky is gray and doesn't add much to the image, I would prefer to blow it up and get the bird brighter, especially the shadow areas under the wing.
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    Hi Thanaboon,
    The repost is much better, but still needs a boost of saturation and contrast, might open up the mid-tones too...I like the angle of capture with the open wing span...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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    another repost
    adjust white point, add contrast, add saturation, sharpen head a tiny bit more.

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    This is an amazing shot. It looks underexposed and has a colour cast, but the sharpness and wingspan are terrific. I tried a rework, I hope you don't mind. Put it through I Correct Colour and then curves.

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    Thank you Jackie for the repost, I really like it. Look so much better.

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    You are welcome, it is such a stunning image I hope you rework it and post it in Avian.

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