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    During our recent trip to the Kgalagadi Transfrontier Park, we had some gorgeous light and some stunning clouds on some of the days. As a budding landscape photographer whose first love photographically is wildlife, I couldn't resist attempting some 'combos' :). Call them 'animalscapes' if you will.

    This is a B&W conversion of a shot taken during almost midday. I have many different compositions of this scene of the blue wildebeest standing solitary on a dune with those lovely clouds, and in many cases the colour versions come out tops in my preference. I will post some more in due time, but here I liked the tones and the enhancement of the lines made by die B&W conversion.

    I would like to know what you think, and also what could be done to improve - specifically in the B&W tonal adjustments?

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    Hi Morkel. Very strong image! Great silouette and placement within the image. IMO it's the clouds that really make the image with wispy, diagonal flowing lines. Excellent choice to convert to B&W!

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    Hey Mork, well thoughtout, and I feel your conversion works very well. Overall, super comp, with the majority of the comp showing the sky, and you have placed the wildebeest very well. Great image.

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    I like it very much. It is a really impressive foto. Great work.

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    Very creative and full marks for thinking out of the box! Very powerful

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    thanks so much for the kind comments Stu, Chris, Attila & Dave! I'm humbled :)
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    Very nice B&W conversion, that sky is 'killer', good fg interest and well placed silhouette :)

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    Hi Morkel. Great mood captured here. Love the clouds and silhouette. Great comp too. VWD!

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    Ditto great comment. Works well Morkel I like the cloud effects and comp
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    thanks for viewing and the kind comments Chris, Vida & Tell...
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    Lovely, powerful image, Morkel!! Well seen and the B&W is a great way to present it. Clouds are wonderful.

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    WOW bro, absolutely top notch! You don't need 10fps to pull this rabbit outta hat! :D B&W works perfectly! Those clouds blow my mind.

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    Terrific shot, great b/w conversion, very artistic, Morkel !

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    Interesting look Morkel. Great sky, especially for this effect. I like the way the bushes seem to be lined up and pointing in the same direction as the clouds. Neat shot.

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    Morkel, your recent trip has really produced some wonderful images. I love the graphic effect in this photograph especially with the contrast in the foreground working so well with the soft, wispy feel of the clouds. I agree with you about trying to incorporate landscapes with a bit of wildlife … lifts both to new heights IMHO.

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    thanks Hilary, Steve, Kiran, John & Akos!

    your kind words are much appreciated...
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    This is absolute stunner , Print it big & hang it
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    Morkel,
    This is a lovely image. The diagonal patterns in the sky is terrific. I like the composition and the black and white conversion makes it over the top.

    Cheers,
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    thanks Harshad Bhai and Sabyasachi...appreciate it!!
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    Wonderful image. Indeed a sense of loneliness. I really like your PP work here and the sky as mentioned is superb.

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    Morkel, I hope the SA tourist board is compensating you as these images so make me (and I'm sure others) want to visit and see the place. A stunning image, one could certainly experiment on adjustments but why bother, great as presented.

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    A+! Everything works in this image. I especially like the way the light plays off the ground.

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    appreciate the kind feedback Danny, Dave & Declan.

    @ Declan - I wish they were giving me a kickback :);)
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    Hi Morkel, as everyone here has put it rightly its simple 'Powerful'. Very nice image and well taken. Congrats!!

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    thank you Nagesh :)
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    Morkel,

    Excellent work. I did not find this mentioned but I like the extreme contrast in the FG (the ground) to the point of being hard to look at. I feel it contrasts (pun intended) with the overall look of the scene.

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    thanks Robert. I hadn't even looked at it that way but now that you mention it I think it's what adds to this image's appeal to me personally, and also to the sense of the place I wanted to convey. such a harsh country, yet more beautiful than mere pictures or words can attempt to convey...
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    Killer killer image Morkel! Love almost everything about it. The sky makes for such a powerful scene, that I would be tempted to see how this would look like with a larger crop of the bottom. In this way I think you emphasize the sky that much more. Also if it fits your personal ethics I would see what this looks like without the darker shadowed plant on the right, as now I have the feeling that it competes with the wildebeast a little. Even though the way it is presented now is excellent already! Love it and congrats

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    thanks for the kind words and the suggestions Krijn! I will certainly play around with your idea sometime tonight...
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    Super image Morkel! The B&W conversion is incredible, lending a real sense of drama to the image.
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    thanks a lot, Doug!
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    Very dramatic image! Love the clouds and the comp. Looks great in BW!

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    appreciate the feedback Dan :)
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    just some midweek fun - it was mentioned on other forums that the extreme contrast could be toned down in the FG. I like it as is, but decided to play around with the idea, and this is the result...
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    a beauty...morkel

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    thanks Peter :)
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