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    Patrick Jeudy
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    This past sunday at Crandon Park. It was slow and windy, the water ripples where very bad, not much activity though.

    Canon 30D,. 100-400 @330 MM
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    I Iike bird`s colors and the clean BG!

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    Looks nice. I love the composition. I would have loved some more dof

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    I like the composition, especially how the crown goes diagonally up towards to top left corner. I might brighten it just a bit.

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    Hi Patric Sure is a fun place to photograph !!!

    I was there Saturday afternoon and they up on a show Displaying right in front of my group for about five minutes or more

    I like the head angle and crop Direct eye contact is very good Also lined up well for a pleasing bg Agree on increasing the dof for the head feathers At this close distance It is difficult to get them all within it !!! I like it a lot !!!

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    Will be flying your bird over to the other bird gallery I know they roam free but they are domestic !!!

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    I like the complimentary colors and crop dimensions alot.

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    Nice colors and BG. I wish the tip of the bill were a bit sharper.

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    Patrick
    The colors are absolutely stunning. Good job getting a complimentary BG at Crandon and a nice composition. The only thing that I would suggest would be for a little more DOF. Closeup portraits need a lot more DOF because they are........closeup. Well done.

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    I'm sending you my info Alfred.
    Thanks for feedback guys !! It was a very slow sunday there and I didn't arrive there till 4 pm :-(

    I took a look at the Raw file of this image at 100% and the feather on the head are actually very sharp.
    it's the very end of the bill that's a liitle soft, very small softness, but it's there.

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    Gus Cobos
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    Well done Patrick,
    I like the close up pose...:cool:

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