This is an old photo of mine showing a fly on a sunflower, hence the pun in the title :). I had originally done this in color, but after experimenting I think the shadows stand out better when it's in monchrome. Any C&C are welcome!
Olympus SP-550 UZ
F6.3 @ 1/500, ISO 100, -0.7 EV
Aperture priority mode, pattern metering, auto WB
Processed in PS CS2; cropped, channel mixer, curves adjustment, and added sepia tone using hue/saturation
Really nice, very creative on using the shadow cause by the fly on the other side of the petal. Love the shadow details on the petal too. I might crop so that the flower is more center since the fly seems like the main subject to me.
Hi Christopher I like the shadow overlay of petals but the shadow of the fly is not dark enough to me. I am thinking of your OOTB posts a while back where the shadow was much darker. To me it made a more compelling image.
Thanks everyone, I appreciate the comments! Jackie, I didn't want to darken the shadows too much because then I'd lose the translucent feel of the petals, but I did try darkening the shadows, particularly the fly, a little more in this repost. Let me know what you think.
I think the OOTB images worked better for me because it was harsh lighting and to me it made the shadow more eerie. I think the lighting for the petals in this one is ideal, but doesn't have the drama of the other like the OOTB. IMO only:)
Hi Chris,
I like the composition, image and capture...also like the fly's shadow...would recommend on boosting the contrast and the saturation just a little to make it pop...looking forward to your next one...:cool: