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    Gal Shon
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    Took the family up north, for the new years holiday.
    Very close to a beautiful, rocky and a little remote shore, lots of shore birds all around...
    Yesterday was wonderful weather, but I didn't choose the best spot. this image is one of a few.
    This morning I went back, the poor weather and the very high sea did not hold me back,
    45 min' later the sea gave me a small taste, everything got wet...
    Audio and speaker are dead, I barely saved the camera.
    I have to go back...
    ~ 85% of the original, 40D 400/f5.6
    Iso 200, 1/640, f9, -0.33
    All C&C are appreciated and thanks for looking.
    Last edited by Gal Shon; 09-20-2009 at 02:58 PM.

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    Gal:

    Nice story, glad you didn't drown. :)

    Nice pose, like the slightly raised front foot.Sharp, well exposed,good HA.

    I might crop 20% of the free space off the top, just a matter of taste really.

    Thanks for your efforts and the sharing!

    Randy

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    I love the pose, light, perch, colors, detail and BG, I would've left more room at the bottom though and as Randy's said, a crop from top would improve comp. Congratulations!

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    Nice pose and clean smooth BG. I prefer tighter on top too.
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    I like the angle, eye contact and BG and would put the bird a bit higher in the frame.

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    Super pose, and I like the light, detail and overall colours. This is sharp, and I would maybe lighten the eye a little. I agree adding a bit to the bottom will work.

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    Pointing your lens down a bit would have given you a stronger comp. Having a bit of fill-flash would have been good for the dark chest. Good pose by the turnstone. The orange legs look great against the blue sea.


    Close call on the gear - glad the photo equipment survived!

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