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    ashkan ojaghi
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    Hi
    This is My first post here in Avian forum .. i'm not sure about the Species but i think this is a Cetti's warbler ..captured in NW of iran
    Hope you like it and comments are appreciated
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    Welcome to BPN Ashkan!

    Although I'm finding the bird small in the frame I'm enjoying the garden setting you photographed it in. Perfect pose - I like the crossed primaries. I do find the BG, especially the OOF plant directly in front of the bird, a bit busy.

    Keep them coming!

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    I agree - a tighter crop removing the OOF bottom but leaving the nice background I think would improve the image. The lighting and colours are really nice

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    The bird is very nice (pose, detail both very good). I agree with Daniel that the garden setting is pleasing. If it were mine I might crop a bit oFf the left (up to the flower about a third in) and some off the right ( up to the clump of flowers under the rear of the bird. If it is within our ethics I might see how the image is effected my removing the out of focus plant in front of the bird. Thanks for sharing.

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    Love the nice comp, pose, detail and perch, species is nice as well as sharpness and color. If you can, try to brighten the shadowed ares in the BG, I am sure this will improve the BG a lot.
    Congratulaitons!

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    Hi
    Thank you very much for your comments .. I wanted to include all of the blooms in the frame and did not crop it tighter but i tried it and this is the result:

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