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    40D, EF 100mm f2.8 macro
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    1/100 sec
    ISO 400
    Manual mode, tripod.

    Don't know the name of this tiny pale yellow wildflower, but liked the pattern on the petals. Maybe someone can help with the ID. Some flowers, like this one, are single on the stem, but there are also stems with clusters of flowers.

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    Love the pattern on the petals too, and you also captured a fine details there. Love the DOF. The transition in color in the background gave this a little bit of mysterious feel.

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    great feel to this one. i like the dof making the stem soft. i think some more one the bottom would make it better? something compositionally doesnt seem right? all other techs are perfect for me!

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    I really like the soft color on the flower, the BG is nice as well. Love the detail on the petals. I would add some canvas to the left just so the flower is not so centered. Great job:)

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    Hi Ovidiu,
    I like the capture, you have a good color rendition with fine details, I would recommend adding more stem at the bottom and more canvas to the left side of the frame...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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    Love the detail in the flower. Great color capture on this.

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    Love the detail and the colours - think I might go against the grain here and crop it square to provide some symmetry.
    Techs covered above - Nice work.

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    I was thinking along the same line a Lance with a square corp and tighter Will make a strong image, the stem part I'm having trouble figuring what else to do !!

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    Thank you for comments and suggestion.
    Tried to add canvas but was not pleased with result because I'm not very good at PP.
    Square and tight: (maybe too tight?)

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    Like the tight crop, cool image.

    Beautiful colors too, I love the green on green nature look and feel.

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    Hi Ovidiu,
    Great DOF and blurred BG. I think I am with Harold and would like to see more of a vertical. Very nice image. Well done.

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