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Nice surroundings, nice view of the muscles in the chest and shoulders, good BG colors, natural behavior, and some eye contact on top of that. Seems alright to me. I like Fab's little tweak.
Love the image and the clear view of the eye above the leafy branch. Fabs repost is excellent. Fabs, what did you do? And what did you mean by this: "it just needed darker borders to keep the eye inside the picture."???
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Yes, I meant doing the borders a little darker as a way to keep the viewer's eyes from wandering out of the picture, the light edges not stopping the eyes.
I used Nik Colors Effex Complete Darken/Lighten center. Nik can be downloaded for a free trail version here: