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    Default Cape Griffon Vulture


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    I like the angle and BG in this one. You could try to get more details in underwings and tone down the highlights at the wings and back. I might put the bird a tad further to the right in the frame. Keep them coming!

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    Love the composition and the details in the bg, showing just enough to add interest. Feel the CGV could go a tad sharper and the brighter wing patches toned down a tad, but nothing major. There is some blur in the lower wing primaries that looks like overlap from PS work. Agree with axel on a tad move to the right. TFS
    Last edited by David Fletcher; 09-08-2009 at 02:14 PM. Reason: additional thoughts

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    Excellent advise above, nothing major, just a couple of steps and this couls shine some more. Lovely BG abd colors.

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    Ditto Axel here
    lovely pose with wonderful BG
    TFS

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    Superb BG. Agree with Axel's suggestions. Posting technical details will help maximise constructive feedback.
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    Thanx all for the C&C comments, much appreciated

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    Lovely BG and liked the incoming pose..

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