Hi Desmond,
I like the capture angle and diagonal landing pose with the raised wings...you have good color rendition with fine details in the whites, and the high-key makes it for me...I would suggest on cropping 1/4 from the left side of the frame, and adding more canvas to the right...aside from this, well done Sir...looking forward to more...:cool:
Hi Desmond - has a nice light airy feel to it - agree with Gus's suggestions - love the pose with the fanned out tail - I love high key!!
Keep em coming :)
It is nice the way it is....just my thoughts but I don't feel that a limited amount of blown whites are going to cause me to toss a photo into the bin. I have printed some(many) with blown spots and the average person that looks at them will never notice them.