I like the detail in the face Aiden, and the unconventional crop with the body drifting away OOF. My initial thought too was that a bit more contrast might be beneficial. In Ps Curves, the Linear Contrast preset is pretty useful for this (learned that one from Artie).
Hi Aidan, great detail from the head and beak, and another vote for a vertical, adding to the bottom too. ( it should be easy to add if you dont have space from your original.)