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    Opinions wanted on the unusual comp. The wings and tail had some motion blur, and I had already cut off the tail, so I decided to crop it tight.

    I probably should have toned down the bright parts of the perch a bit...

    50D, 100-400 at 400
    1/250, f/5.6, ISO 400
    Tripod, Blind, moderate crop
    Last edited by Aidan Briggs; 09-06-2009 at 03:40 PM.

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    I like the pose, eye contact and BG. As for the crop, I might crop a bit more top and bottom or try a vertical crop. Maybe a bit more contrast?

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    Thanks Axel. I already added some contrast, but maybe it needs a bit more.

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    I like the soft light, Perch, sharpness, BG, and pose.
    Might try a vertical crop.

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    I like the detail in the face Aiden, and the unconventional crop with the body drifting away OOF. My initial thought too was that a bit more contrast might be beneficial. In Ps Curves, the Linear Contrast preset is pretty useful for this (learned that one from Artie).

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    Aidan, I like the unique crop and the details in the face are great. The perch and BG are both very nice. Agree w/ contrast.

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    Thanks all for the good advice. John, I used the linear contrast preset and it turned out nice.

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    Hi Aidan, great detail from the head and beak, and another vote for a vertical, adding to the bottom too. ( it should be easy to add if you dont have space from your original.)

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