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    Default Ick!! (avocet)

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    D70s 70-200VR+2X@240 1/640 f/5.6 !SO 800 0EV handheld

    This one is from two months ago. The bird had been preening (some slight evidence on its lower beak) and seems to be watching a lone feather float to the ground. I sensed a look of displeasure . . . Unfortunately the busy background worked against me here. The image is cropped and tweaked a bit.

    Wendell

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    Good behavior Wendell !!!

    Well exposed and sharp, might brighten just a bit and a catch light would have been great Not sure if you did anything to the bg but looks funny just above the bird btw placing the head just in front of the little green clump would have helped but not sure I would have noticed at the time of making the image.

    For these we always talk about the low angle but it means getting muddy !!!

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    HI Wendell - AL nailed it for me - You must be sick of hearing about getting low!!!

    Does transform the image though. Keep em coming :)

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    HI Wendell,
    I like your capture with the open bill...all techs. and good advise given, looking forward to more...:cool:

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    The blah! expression makes this one. Suggestions: Set white point on white feathers near the tail (I used 233.233.233) to remove cyan cast. S/H to open shadow details a bit ... and a couple of dabs with a paint brush to brighten the iris and add a tiny catchlight.


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    Nice repost David!!!

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    No, I did not touch that odd background, Alfred.

    Your re-post certainly improves, David. And I hadn't even noticed the cyan cast. I always benefit from your specific explanations of what you have done to an image.

    Yep, I must get lower!

    And thanks to all . . . I still learn with almost every post . . .

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    Really nice expression captured, the bird do looks like coughing up feather. Agree with the advice given and the repost made this image even better.

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