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    Loong-Tat Wong
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    Hi
    Sharing another forest resident which tends to hide in the canopy of broadleaved evergreen forest. Lucky to get him briefly in the open. Your kind C and Cs will be much appreciated.Thanks.

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    Loong-Tat:

    Your bird is sharp, well exposed, nice look back pose. The upward shooting angle is noticeable but probably unavoidable. My major concern is the background, particularly the bright patch RUC. I would consider toning that down, and I think it would make the bird show better.

    The flash catchlight looks a bit unnatural, because it is lower than the natural catchlights are. Might be fun to try a version with the catchlight moved up towards the top.

    Thanks for sharing, this difficult to image bird.

    Randy

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Beautiful bird and good eye contact. Adding to Randy's suggestions I wish the angle were less steep. Could you have moved back a few steps?

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