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    Another HB image from my first trip to Trinidad and my first attempt at multi-flash with hummingbirds.

    Camera Canon Mk111 Lens - 500mm f4 Exp 1/200 @f29 but the actual exp. was provided by the Flash guns.
    Four Canon 580's on bird, one on BG, all at 1/16th power

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    I like the action and pose. Sharpness and exposure look good too. I would probably eliminate the stray "twig" near the tail, and run some NR on the BG. As presented I find there is too much space behind the subject.

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    Beautiful sharpness and pose. I like the BG and the perch.Agree w/ Daniel on the space behind the bird. Nicely done!!

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    Fine image. Fine critiques. This can be made really fine with a bit more post production.

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    Love the pose and the head peaking out between the wings. Agree with Daniel's suggestion and I'd go for a less centered composition.

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    I just love it ! but have to agree with the observations above, although they are minor, will make it even better.

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    Outstanding Melvin. Although unconventional, I can more than live with the crop and the "peek-a-boo" adds to the out of the box feel. It is definitely an unconventional and very clever hummingbird image.

    And yes, hummers actually do have feet, as evidenced here!

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    Amazingly sharp with lovely colours, and I like the hovering posture. Good looking perch, and I agree there is too much space on the RHS.

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