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    Thanks in advance for your comments and suggestions!
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    A very nice natural parasol Lady Mirenchu...:) I like the lower diagonal introduction and placement of the stem in frame...the natural symmetrical patterns of the leaf takes your eyes all the way around it like a merry-go-round...I like it...a few suggestions to enhance this lovely composition: You might want to kick up the saturation and contrast just a tad, and lighten the mid-tone a little. to make it come alive...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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    Thank you Gus! Could you tell me if this version is better?

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    Much better Lady Mirenchu...:) the colors are more vivid without going over board...well done...:cool:

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    Repost rocks - well done - nicley composed and executed :)

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    Hi Mirenchu, I happen to agree the repost is very strong. Very well handled in all respects!

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    This is a fascinating image. Another possibility: Make the light brighter at the "hub" and dropping off toward the edges. Something like this:


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    Mirenchu, it's a beautiful image and the repost makes it really nice. I love the radiating lines. Nice job:)

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    Thank you very much for all your comments and help! David's repost looks great, I love it!!! Thanks again!

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    It is a fascinating image Mirenchu Perfect crop and placement !!! I like David's suggestion Image keeps looking better !!!

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    Nice crop and color transition. Repost are looking good but getting close to over sat IMO.

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    Very nice all around.

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    Nice, Love the green white and black all in this picture. It looks like a piece of art, great job:)

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    Me encanta! la version de David esta muy atinada. Felicidades.

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