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    Canon 40D & Canon 100-400MM
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    LR--->CS4 (trying B&W stuff)
    Last edited by Jeff Cashdollar; 08-30-2009 at 10:44 PM.

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    I like the jet trails in B&W of your image, it looks the jet trying to lit the sky on fire to me. If this is in color the jet trails would be white and I won't have that feeling. Nicely done.

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    Default Repost With Red Vapor Trail

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    Repost, its late and I'm losing it.

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    Your repost rocks!!!

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    Hi Jeff,
    I like your original the best...its well composed and executed...also like your new copy right...:D:cool:
    Last edited by Gus Cobos; 08-31-2009 at 06:44 AM.

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    Original for me as well - well composed - Congrats.

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    Like the original. This is an image that took me a few moments to appreciate but once captivated, I like it a lot. My only suggestion would be to widen the tonal range a bit. You could darken some of the areas by playing with the red photo filter in Photoshop.

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    Default Repost With Red Photo Filter Applied

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    Took Nick's Advise

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    Default Repost With Red Photo Filter Applied

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    Backed it down a tad

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    Default Repost With Red Photo Filter Applied - 23% filter

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    I backed it down more

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    Like the first picture, great job:)

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    All look sort of cool and fine image Jeff !!! If I had to pick one would go with the original I like your sense of vision !!!! Big Congrats !!!

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    Really like the original Jeff. Super shot.

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    Thanks to all. I was waiting for birds to fly across the water and no one would take-off. I saw this jet and took the shot. The image I pictured in my mind was totally different, this image is not what I had in mind and once posted I was a little disappointed, so it goes.

    Back to birds.
    Last edited by Jeff Cashdollar; 08-31-2009 at 10:14 AM.

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    Excellent compos, Jeff and my vote is for the original, maybe a bit darker overall. Sweet!

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    another vote for the original. there's a great range of tones in it. PP is very well done. sometimes it's tough to beat your original vision!!

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    Jeff, Your original is my pick also, but I like your creative thinking!!

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    Jeff, I go with the original also. I was just suggesting the red filter to darken the blacks a bit, of course there are other ways to that as well. I don't like the re-post either.

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    Thanks Nick, the red filter often helps with B&W tones so the suggestion was a good one anyway.

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