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    Default Simon Says....Leg Up



    When I saw these young White Ibises passing one another, it brought a smile to my face. Hope it does the same for you.

    Thank you for looking.

    Marina

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    Very nice symmetrical composition, good detail, wish both birds were parallel to image plane. I would clone out the OOF band in the foreground it is somewhat distracting.

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    beautiful compo and sharpness, lovely BG , Another vote for cloning OOF band in FG
    TFS

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    Really nice comp - you almost got perfect symmetry. Agree about the band in the foreground, but I think it's a bit too much to clone out.

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    Nice the pose of the birds and nice HA and details too, other than the band below, the bird look too bright to me.. just give it a second touch up.. still liked this.. congrats..

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    I like this a lot. The back bird looks a bit sharper to me, perhaps because the head angle makes the eye pop. I would fix the OOF bottom. Perhaps add some of the canvase from the water just below the feet. Might be tough to get leg reflections included however.

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    Nice composition. I also think the white are a bit over. It makes it look 'flashed'...primarily because of teh darker tones in the BG. The symmetry is awesome.

    KD

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