Very nice symmetrical composition, good detail, wish both birds were parallel to image plane. I would clone out the OOF band in the foreground it is somewhat distracting.
Nice the pose of the birds and nice HA and details too, other than the band below, the bird look too bright to me.. just give it a second touch up.. still liked this.. congrats..
I like this a lot. The back bird looks a bit sharper to me, perhaps because the head angle makes the eye pop. I would fix the OOF bottom. Perhaps add some of the canvase from the water just below the feet. Might be tough to get leg reflections included however.
Nice composition. I also think the white are a bit over. It makes it look 'flashed'...primarily because of teh darker tones in the BG. The symmetry is awesome.