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    Made this with D40X , 70-300VR ,F5.6 , ISO 200 at 1/640 secs
    No Visit to Jim Corbett National Park will complete without such mesmerizing evening when elephants came to Ramganga river
    all C & C welcoem & much appreciated
    Harshad

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    Harshad,
    I really like the warm light of this one. Must be quite a site to witness. I like the very subtle lighting on the backs of the ones up front in the middle. Wish you could have had some seperation between the members of the group. The three bright spots of water between the elephants really stands out. Perhaps they could be filled with a sample of the more pleasing golden, rippled water on the right. Regardless of my critique, this one really conveys a strong sense of mood.

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    I like the comp and the color. Would like to see more detail on the bottom part of the image.

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    Beautiful colors Harshad. Must have been great to witness. Thanks for sharing.

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    Very striking composition with awesome lighting and well composed . Would love to have been there. Imo it needs a tad CW rotation. Love this one Harshad and thanks for sharing.

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    I would prefer to have at least one elephant in profile. A sil is in essence a graphic representation of the subject, the more the subject is clearly recognizable to the viewer the more powerful and successful the image. And, if that element is in a focal point the image can be even stronger.

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    Excellent capture. But as Chas mentioned, if one elephant would have had some separation from the herd, it would have been even better. if it was possible, a lower angle would have made it better too. Were you in a car or on an elephant?

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    Hi Harshad,
    Rotation mentioned.....I might go with a little bit of levels brightness between the legs and darker FG area......this will allow the silhouettes to stand out more and give a bit more seperation. Must have been quite the spectacle to witness!

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