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    Jason Ambler
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    Camera Canon 5D
    Lens EF70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM
    Focal Length 125.0 mm
    Shooting Date/Time Late afternoon
    Shutter Speed 1/160Sec.
    Aperture F3.5
    Metering Modes Evaluative metering
    Exposure Compensation 0
    ISO Speed 200

    This redtail was in a tree in front of me with the sun at its back when it so kindly flew to within 15 feet of me as the sun was setting. I was able to take a few photographs before the sun set and the bird grew tired of staring at me and took to the air.

    C&C always welcomed and appreciated

    Jason

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    Gautam Biswas
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    This is a nice image of the bird. Th eyes are sharp and with a catchlight. The warm light gives the impression of the dusk. What I wonder is on the composition, I think it is too much to the left of the frame. A vertical crop might have been better but the snow in the BG would look odd unless you clone it off.

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    Nice pose Jason. This is an image that would benefit from a little more sharpening, particularly the eye. You could consider using a higher ISO with your 5D; that would let you use a smaller aperture, faster shutter speed, or both. That might help with the sharpness.

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    Maxis Gamez
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    Hi Jason,

    The composition works for me, but the snow is a huge distraction. I would also add more sharpening to the image.

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    Jason Ambler
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    Gautam, Doug and Maxis,

    Thank you for your comments they are much appreciated. I agree that the image could be sharper but I think I may be at the edge of my ability to sharpen since when I try and increase it any more it shows noise in the image. The initial image was not as sharp as I would have liked because 1) I was handholding the lens 2) I had it on AI SERVO since I thought he was going to fly toward me not land in front of me. I know I have to learn to use the buttons on the camera like it was second nature (I'm working on it).

    I have tried some of the suggestions (I'm not trying to save the image as I know technically it is lacking but I am trying to learn just the same). In the new image...Removed snow, changed composition and a little more sharpening. Better or worse?

    Thanks for looking again,

    Jason

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    Anita Rakestraw
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    Looks better to me with the modifications. I would be thrilled to have taken this! I'd definitely keep it until I got a better one!

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    The repost is much improved. Just another round of sharpening. Maybe like this:

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    Jason Ambler
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    Thank you Anita for your kind comment and Axel for your suggestion to sharpen further.

    Jason

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