Not sure about this Chas. Like the furtive look, with the foliage masking the cub. Feel as an image on its own rights there are too many conflicts, but do understand that as a narrative, eg in a book, this would have a place as does tell a story.
Nice job on the greens. I also like the way he's peeking through the grass. While I like the depth that the bushes on the left (as viewed) provide, I think a vertical comp somewhere on the left edge of the grass clump would work as well.
Great moment captured Chas and I sure am glad that you did not get any closer or did you !!!! Really have loved all your images from Alaska and thanks for sharing.