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    Baya Weaver (Ploceus philippinus)
    Camera : Nikon D300
    Lens : Nikkor 80-400D ED VR f4.5/5.6
    Exposure : 1/1250sec @ 400mm
    Aperture : f/9
    ISO Rating : 400
    Captured On : Aug 25 2009, 72 am
    Location : Village near my house, Kadi Road, Mehsana, Gujarat, INDIA

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    Mital,
    I like the eyecontact and the details in the image. The composition is a bit centered to my taste. Well done in getting close to this fellow.

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    Sabyasachi

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    Nice details on the bird with a pleasing background. I'd crop this to more of a square format as it feels like there is too much room at the top creating a very centered composition.

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    Very sharp with an excellent EXP as expected. Love the HA and the bit of seed in the bill. Light angle also right-on.

    The foreground leaf is a big distraction and the comments on the COMP are right on. This type of image can be extremely awkward and the extra room above does not help things.
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    Exposure, BG and sharpness look very good. Adding to the other comments, I would remove the bright spots on the lower mandible.

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