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    Here is another photo of the Osprey series. This is a few seconds after the take off. I used the selective color adjustment I learned from Akos (thanks again brother), but I can't judge if the value is enough, since I don't have a calibrated monitor. Let me know what you think.

    1DMKIII
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    I like the wing position, eye contact and angle. The highlights could go a bit darker and I might sharpen the bird a tad more.

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    agree for the highlights,beautiful pose/eye contact!

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    Nice comp. and wing position. Eye needs to be sharper and the whites seem a bit hot in the neck area.

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    The HA and wing position are great. Sharpness and highlights have been mentioned, so won't repeat.

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    Don't know if you re-posted this or not, but the shrpness looks fine on my end.

    Hot whites have been discussed already but it looks as though the light was intense so there wasn't awhole lot more you could do (I think).

    The thing that catches my eye is the crop as I'd prefer to have the bird higher on the frame with more space below it to move into.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jim Fenton View Post
    Don't know if you re-posted this or not, but the shrpness looks fine on my end.

    Hot whites have been discussed already but it looks as though the light was intense so there wasn't awhole lot more you could do (I think).

    The thing that catches my eye is the crop as I'd prefer to have the bird higher on the frame with more space below it to move into.
    My reaction was similar to Jim's. You have a nice image. If there is more room on the bottom, I'd re-crop. If not, adding canvas would be another option.

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    Nice image , agreed with constructive comments
    TFS

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    Ez nagyon klassz, s igen tetszik. ;)

    Add some canvas below brother. I doubt you could do jack about the light intensity, to me whites look OK, a bit on the hot side, but acceptable. Thanks for sharing. :)

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    Nit covered great wing position captured Lorant. Well Done!

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