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Thread: Haiku - Bird of prey

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    Default Haiku - Bird of prey

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    I'm a bird of prey
    Swooping down to take you out
    That's my way of life


    Or an alternate could be:

    I'm a bird of prey
    Swooping down to take you out
    Eat you bit by bit

    I applied a topaz clean filter first, then a NikFX 3.0 Grad ND, then a NikFX 3.0 Saturation.

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    Akos, I think they are both good. I would pick #2 as it seems more in line w/ a raptor. Beautiful image and effect. I love that the bird is flying toward you and that the underwings are well lit to see the detail.

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    Lance Warley
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    I'll be honest. I'm having trouble with this one, Akos.

    It sounds like the raptor is justifying itself...sort of aggressive-belligerent, in a chest-thumping tone.

    I think the words conflict with the photo, because the photo is stunningly beautiful, and that's the way I think of raptors.

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    Julie Kenward
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    How about:

    I'm a bird of prey
    Gliding on the sun's last rays
    Hunting's all I know.

    GORGEOUS image, Akos! Wowee is that awesome!

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    Thanks folks for all the suggestions and honest feedback. I appreciate your time. :)

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