Stephen, I like this a lot - unique wing position, good light, background and catchlight in the eye. As you say more clearance would have helped, but cant have it perfect always.
This is good Stephen. Gorgeous light, head angle and wing position. As you say, separation of the feet would have been the icing on the cake, but I'd take this any day.
Agree with Kiran about left wing whites. Look a touch too bright to me. Otherwise a mighty awesome image mate. I really like the pose. Light is good other than what I mentioned. :)