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    Elmar Venter
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    Another image that I have taken over the weekend.

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    Your comments and critiques will be highly appreciated.

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    Nice pose and good comp. I like the wings up. Focus looks spot on too, your panning was well executed. The image seems a be too light - reduce the overall exposure a bit would be a good option. I also wish the heron had looked a bit more this away instead of away.

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    As Daniel noted, Image overexposed / over lit, otherwise nice photo

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    Ditto Daniel. I would add that a little more space in front of the bird would be nice.

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    Suggestions already made Elmar,. Tack sharp though. :)

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    Thanks for all the suggestions! Does this look better?

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    Very nice and the repost is definitely an improvement, well done.

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    like the flight pattern.however agree would like to see more saturation good job!

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    YOur repost is super Elmar! It is a fantastic shot and I only would love a slightly better HA. But it still rocks! :) Thanks for sharing.

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    Elmar Venter
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    Thank you very much for your comments - much appreciated!

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