Shot this at Longwood Gardens in the arborateum. They have a cactus and succulent area. Used fill flash at a -1or -11/3
Shot this as a slide and converted in silver fx.
I also like your comp but think it might have been even stronger if that center area was more towards the URC. Still, for being such a "middle gray" black and white, I love it. It's not often I like a mostly mid-tone image but this one really works.