Results 1 to 20 of 20

Thread: Scissor tailed flycatcher

  1. #1
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Dallas, Texas.
    Posts
    6,260
    Threads
    426
    Thank You Posts

    Default Scissor tailed flycatcher

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    40d. 300 f/4L non-IS. 1.4x. 1/2000. f/5.6. iso 400. 70% crop.

    All critiques welcome and appreciated.

    KD

  2. #2
    Subharghya
    Guest

    Default

    Beautiful Bird .. Very Beautiful BG which complements the bird very well .. I feel you can crop some space from left .. A lovely image in all

  3. #3
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    One of the longest tails Ive seen on a bird. I like the detail and colours on the bird, and what a lovely red eye. I like yellow flowers spread across the BG. I would leave the comp as is.

  4. #4
    Forum Participant Manos Papadomanolakis's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Crete Greece
    Posts
    3,408
    Threads
    179
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    beautiful pose/eye contact and fantastic bg!!!

  5. #5
    Axel Hildebrandt
    Guest

    Default

    Cool bird, I like the sharpness and colorful BG. I only wish for a bit more eye contact.

  6. #6
    Lifetime Member Doug Brown's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Albuquerque, NM
    Posts
    11,879
    Threads
    917
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    It's always nice to photograph one of these guys sitting on something other than a fence. You got a great BG too. What would take this photo to the next level would be better eye contact IMO.
    Upcoming Workshops: Bosque del Apache 2019, Ecuador 2020 (details coming soon)
    Website -
    Facebook - 500px

  7. #7
    Brian Barcelos
    Guest

    Default

    Only thing I'd change is taking about half off from above the birds head. Congrats

    Brian

  8. #8
    Rohan Kamath
    Guest

    Default

    I loved everything about this image...especially the BG...the composition works nicely for me here...

  9. #9
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Dallas, Texas.
    Posts
    6,260
    Threads
    426
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Doug, you are the third person that has told me that its hard to get a shot of one thats not on a man-made perch. I was in a small grassy patch where there were no fences :-) And May in Dallas means flowers in the grass.

    The biggest challenge I faced was approaching them as there was no cover. Hence, I had to settle for shooting from far. The other problem is that they sit with their back to the sun. I guess that helps them spot the flies.

    For those who dont know, this bird is pretty common here in Texas and Oklahoma in the summer as they come here in large numbers for nesting. They winter south in Mexico. The "scissor" tail is seen in flight usually.

    KD

  10. #10
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Albuquerque, NM
    Posts
    438
    Threads
    55
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Very nice image. As noted, great background. I'd be tempted to crop a bit from the top

  11. #11
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Merida, Yucatan,Mexico
    Posts
    2,809
    Threads
    453
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I love this bird and I found it very difficult to frame. You did a really nice job here. Love the pose, the BG, perch and the feel of the image. Big congratulations.

  12. #12
    Publisher Arthur Morris's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Indian Lake Estates, FL
    Posts
    32,506
    Threads
    1,433
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I love the COMP as presented. And the BKGR is very sweet. Several folks mention the desire for more eye contact. I think that I know what they mean, but I am not sure. As captain of the HA Police, I will say that Section 14B of the HA regulations state the following, " When a bird is angled away from you the very best head angle almost always features the head perfectly parallel to the imaging sensor.
    BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.

    BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.

    Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,

    E-mail me at samandmayasgrandpa@att.net.










  13. #13
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Dallas, Texas.
    Posts
    6,260
    Threads
    426
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thx everyone for the comments. The bird does seem to be looking over my left shoulder.

    Artie...I will read the section aloud to the bird next time:-) I'd have preferred it that way too...but the dude flew off immediately. There's a shot of him flying away on my website. I'll try and post it here some day.

    I have some with a better HA but the BG is more cluttered in those.

    KD

  14. #14
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    May 2009
    Location
    Auranagabad ( MS ) India
    Posts
    12,833
    Threads
    766
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    beautiful image , I am loving that LONG tail
    TFS

  15. #15
    Ákos Lumnitzer
    Guest

    Default

    I do like the crop as is. Nice BG and awesome long tail. A tough framing challenge for sure. You handled it very well. Thanks for sharing. :)

  16. #16
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Bangalore, Karnataka
    Posts
    3,800
    Threads
    236
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Beautiful Bird KD, The Bg looks great, loved the extra space too.. congrats....

  17. #17
    sree.kumar.h
    Guest

    Default

    Nice composition. Long tails are quite challenging for composition and DOF. You have done really well here.

  18. #18
    Publisher Arthur Morris's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Indian Lake Estates, FL
    Posts
    32,506
    Threads
    1,433
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaustubh Deshpande View Post
    The bird does seem to be looking over my left shoulder. Artie...I will read the section aloud to the bird next time:-) I'd have preferred it that way too...but the dude flew off immediately.
    KD
    Hi Kaustubh, Such is the life of a bird photographer. Having nnot been there when you pressed the shutter button, we can only critque what we see :). Even if what we suggest was not possible at the time, such suggestions can help with future improvement.
    BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.

    BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.

    Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,

    E-mail me at samandmayasgrandpa@att.net.










  19. #19
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Dallas, Texas.
    Posts
    6,260
    Threads
    426
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Arthur, I had said it jokingly. I have learned so much about HA and all other aspects of bird photography on this site. I appreciate everyone's help.

    KD

  20. #20
    Publisher Arthur Morris's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Indian Lake Estates, FL
    Posts
    32,506
    Threads
    1,433
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I was referring to the fact that the bird did not give you the pose that you wanted, not to the fact that you were gonna read the head angle rules to it.
    BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.

    BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.

    Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,

    E-mail me at samandmayasgrandpa@att.net.










Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics