Hi Stuart. Nice sharpness, good eye contact, and excellent wing position. I like the dangling feet; too bad about the bands. I notice a halo around the bird, particularly the lower wing. And I might move the bird to the right of the frame.
Last edited by Doug Brown; 08-04-2009 at 09:48 PM.
This is lovely Stuart. Like the suggestion to move the bird, but for me, I'd move it to the right so there is more room in front.. darn we are a fussy lot! :). See the halos as mentioned on the wing tips. Beautiful all the same, with fabulous detail and light quality.
Very nice wing display, well exposed, sharp. Too bad #7 primary is missing from the top wing.
I have kind of mixed feelings about the light angle. It does show more definition by casting shadows, but I also find the shadows a bit distracting. The head is well illuminated which is a big plus.
As far as comp, I am with David, move the bird to the right. I think that is what Doug really meant too ? :)
Also not mad about the jewellery and would clone it out. I like the detail captured on the wing feathers. I would also add a bit of sats to the bill eye and legs.