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    Dear All
    Made this image witn D300, 600mm, ISO 400, 1/100 at F4
    all critiques and commnets are welcome and much appreciated
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    beautiful exposure and BG, Harshad...pops nicely.
    love that eye. I would consider cloning out the leaves - if not the large branch then at least the one in bottom right.

    in our country they are considered pests because they chase all the indigenous birds from their food sources. :)
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    Same here Morkel, they will chase all small birds

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    A little crop behind the bird worked better as a composition for me. And also the leaves were a little distracting so removed them. Everything else is awesome, the exposure, eye contact, BG are bang on.

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    Thanks for the efforts Rohan

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    Beautiful shot. Great focus and background. I like what Rohan did with the cloning, but a little clone outline is noticeable under the tale. Maybe some blur tool would smooth it out.
    Last edited by Gene Potter; 08-02-2009 at 09:36 AM.

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    Hi Harshad. Good looking bird with excellent sharpness and nice detail in the blacks. I don't mind the upper vegetation but I would remove the single leaf at the bottom of the frame. I also think the bird is too centered and would move it to the left. I would have liked to see a slight head turn towards you, but the profile also works nicely.
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    I agree with you Doug and here is repost , How it looks now ?

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    Much better Harshad!
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    fantastic shot sir ji

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    harshad, the repost is fantastic. i love this bird. the eye is different and really neat. you did well on all aspects. bird really pops in the nice light!

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    Excellent detail captured Harshad, and pin sharp too. Great BG, and your repost is much better. Well done.

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    Cracking shot Harshad Bhai! Love the repost. Glad you left the leaves, and have to ask how you find the 600. (I'm using the 500 AF-S II and oft look at the 600 wishfully). Good work! Meant to say, what a wonderful eye this bird has.

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    Beautiful one Harshad.. loved the repost, looks clean with great details... congrats..

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    Harshad, I love the details. I wish the foot wasn't clipped in the repost-but do agree w/ vegetation. Nicely done.

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    Agree with you Denise
    How it looks now ?
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    Harshad, I like the inclusion of the foot much better!!

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    Fantastic details Harshad. The eye of the birds make the image for me.

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    I don't mind the leaves. Your last repost is really nice.

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    very well done.. killer light and pose.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morkel Erasmus View Post
    beautiful exposure and BG, Harshad...pops nicely.
    love that eye. I would consider cloning out the leaves - if not the large branch then at least the one in bottom right.

    in our country they are considered pests because they chase all the indigenous birds from their food sources. :)
    Nice exposure & comp Harshad.
    Agree with Morkel here, they are a REAL PEST here in OZ as well driving out all native species!

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    Brother Harshad,
    You make a PITA bird look beautiful in fact. The second repost where we can see the foot is much better. I prefer to see some foliage as opposed to a clinically clean BG.

    Congrats Bhai! :)

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    Very well exposed, love the feather detail and the BG. Pity about the leaves.
    They are a major problem here in RSA and have spread like wild fire from the coast, inland.

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    Agreed Dave , they are spread like VANAVA ( Wild fire ) here to and now a days they became major destroyers of small bird nests

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