Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: PP Suggestions?

  1. #1
    BPN Member Bill Dix's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Princeton, NJ
    Posts
    12,487
    Threads
    1,892
    Thank You Posts

    Default PP Suggestions?

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    This fellow left his perch before I had a chance to check the blinkies and reshoot, so I grossly overexposed this image. When I adjusted the exposure to -2.00 in RAW Transfer I realized there was a serious shadow of a leaf across his face. I tried to lighten the shadow, and clone a bit from elsewhere on the head, but not to my satisfaction. I also cloned out quite a bit of distracting vegetation, desaturated the yellow, denoised and sharpened, etc. I also tried to desat the bg, but it is still too dark and distracting.

    I will post the original, as shot version for comparison. Suggestions welcomed as to what I might have done (other than get the exp right in the camera), and what I might still do to improve this.

    Nikon D90 with VR 80-400 @400 mm, ISO 500, 1/1250 at 5.6, Aperture priority, matrix metering.

    Thanks,

    Bill

  2. #2
    BPN Member Bill Dix's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Princeton, NJ
    Posts
    12,487
    Threads
    1,892
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Here is the version as-shot, for comparison. Help wanted.

  3. #3
    Publisher Arthur Morris's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Indian Lake Estates, FL
    Posts
    32,506
    Threads
    1,433
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Though I like the basic idea, I do think that this one may be un-saveable. Does RAW transfer have a Recovery Slider?
    BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.

    BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.

    Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,

    E-mail me at samandmayasgrandpa@att.net.










Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics