Very cute capture. You did great with the colors and nice BG. I don't mind the shut eye as it gives this a more intimate feel. I think this might benefit from a crop left and right. Congrats.
Yes, I too think the closed eye adds to the image. I think this could have worked as a vertical with the sides cropped and more of the ducks showing below (I especially find the lower duck awkwardly cut short in the frame). Cute interaction!
Thanks a lot guys. Here is a repost with the sides cropped. I feel this is too square, and adding to the top would leave empty space.
Dan, I agree adding to the bottom will work.
I like the original better than the repost, as it is just too square. I also feel that a vertical original would have been stronger, but I still like the interaction here.