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    David Roach
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    The now famous favorite perch for preparing meals to feed to chicks. Created this morning at Loxahatchee (Just before my shutter died :().
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    I like the landing posture, and what a pity you didnt capture the right wing extended as the left. Comp works well, and I would sharpen him a bit more. I would also darken the BG a tad too. His food a bonus.

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    David:

    Nice moment captured. Stuart hit the tech. points well.
    I suspect the focus point was not on the face, as the wings and perch seem sharper than the eye.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Randy

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    Dang, we had the alarm set to go this morning but changed our mind :(

    We would have gotten to meet you!

    Nice view of Pappa. Toning down the whole image would be good. The red eye show nicely :)

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    Excellent pose and eye contact, looking at histogram it is overexposed a bit and the blacks are too bright, I'd bring it down by 0.7~1EV increase the contrast and redo the sharpening, there are some halos around the wings...

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    Nice pose, only missing the extended right wing as mentioned above. I have not visit yet the kites this year... I guess is too late now.

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    Well done, but with the harsher light this one does not have the magic of previous posts made from this killer situation. The framing here is excellent.
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