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    Dear all
    Made with D300, 600MM, 1/500, F5.6, ISO 800, NR used
    All commnets and Crits welcome and appreciated
    Harshad

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    Harshad:

    Very handsome bird, and the soft light helped this difficult to expose combination of yellow/white and dark gray.

    As posted, there are some hot areas through out the yellows and some of the whites. The detail is still pretty good, so just a minor adjustment of the highlight slider or lowering the overall contrast a bit would do it.

    Great HA.

    From a comp standpoint, I might be tempted to crop off 40% of the free space above, and add a bit to the right!

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Just a quick crop , how it looks now, I have some space in right,

    Harshad

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    Harshad:

    The crop down from above looks better. I mispoke about the other side, I really meant you need to add more space to the left. Sorry! My fault. He really needs a little more space to stare into!

    Cheers

    Randy

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    beautiful image Harshad, I like Randy's comments., and suggest a lower iso for better details, and less noise.

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    Very nicely exposed...I like the details maintained in the conditions and light...

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    Harshad, Super pose, and I like the colours in this. The yellows do look a bit hot on the head, but easily fixed. Your repost is much better. Well done.

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    A very nice image, yellows look fine here.




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    I like the OP better. Nice pose, GREAT DOF, nice soft light and species. Congratulations!

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