Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: pollen

  1. #1
    Forum Participant Valerio Tarone's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    800
    Threads
    211
    Thank You Posts

    Default pollen

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    a simple subject.. yes I know. But The BG is 'intriguing' for me. The colors! The original image was arranged in Nikon Capture, on curves/levels >red >blue .
    Comments .thanks!

  2. #2
    Ákos Lumnitzer
    Guest

    Default

    Hey Valerio :)

    I really like the lower left side BG colors in this. The overall softness gives the image a dream-like feel. It is nice. I find the big OOF white blob competing for attention. Thanks for sharing. :)

  3. #3
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Aug 2010
    Location
    New Jersey
    Posts
    6,829
    Threads
    569
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Hi Valerio, Agree with Akos regarding the white area pulling your eye away. It looks like the seedling is caught in a spider web but it's very ill defined. I think the image would be stronger if you had 1 seedling instead of it merging with another and a solid color backround instead of the backround color almost cut in half. Nothing wrong with a simple subject. Most simple images are stronger than the complex.

  4. #4
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Boynton Beach, Florida
    Posts
    7,726
    Threads
    640
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    agree with the above comments. simpler is stronger most of the time. i'd like for the seedhead to be sharper. i think it might compete better with the light area if it was.

  5. #5
    Ákos Lumnitzer
    Guest

    Default

    H
    I was contemplating mentioning that I'd prefer the seedhead to be sharper. Then I decided that it looks dreamy (better) this way. For my taste at least. :)

  6. #6
    Forum Participant Valerio Tarone's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    800
    Threads
    211
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Yes Thank you!! I must agree that seed head should be better focused. but in field of' form compo' or 'Out of the box I think also that some parts, some images are 'blurred'.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics