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    Default Anhinga Wing Stretch

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    SonyA700~Sony70-400G@400mm~Sony HVL-F56Am for fill-flash~ISO200~F6.3~1/200sec~manual exposure~hand held~Brazos Bend State Park, Texas~7-24-09
    CS4/Topaz Adjust(small detail preset)/Topaz Clean2
    Yet another anhinga! This is a female, by the way.
    comments and critique welcomed.
    regards~Bill

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    Hey Bill, Another image using the technique that I'm fond of. This time a pleasing backround is present and generally more color within the image. If this were my image I would allow more room on the left and a bit more on the right. Rather than looking away I would prefer the head turned more to the viewer and I would eliminate the lines on the right.
    I'm enjoying these and look forward to your next image...

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    Thanks Dave. Normally I would'nt post a revised version, but those lines you mentioned really bugged me (funny how I missed them in the first place). Also added to the left. Nothing can be done with the head angle. When photographing the bird I suggested as much, but she wouldn't have anything to do with it. Spite. regards~Bill
    Last edited by WIlliam Maroldo; 07-26-2009 at 11:27 PM.

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    Nice Bill...I like what your doing!

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    Bill, I like the pose and the treatment is fantastic! The feathers look great!!Another well done beauty!!

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    GReat treatment, I wish only for a better Head Angle. :) Thanks for sharing Bill.

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    Bill, I love the treatment of this image and the bg is beautiful. The feather detail is really nice and the treatment
    makes it even nicer IMHO:D

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