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    Default A time to chill.

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    Understand the need to raise the ISO.

    Camera: D2XS
    200-400mm @ 400mm
    600mm (in 35mm film)
    1/90 sec, f/4
    Mode: Av
    Metering: Multi-segment
    ISO: 100
    White balance: Auto
    Flash: On
    File size: 5,677KB
    Image size: 1204 x 800
    Color space: AdobeRGB
    Saturation: Normal
    Sharpness: Low
    Contrast: Normal
    Color profile: Adobe RGB (1998)

    C&C are appreciated.

    Rob..............

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    I'm glad you understand the need for higher ISO in this situation as you got quite slow shutter speed for both the focal lenght and the active type of bird you photographed. Critical focus point is on the wing and combined with the shallow DOF it has rendered the face softer than the body (too bad it is looking away). I wish the greenish "blob" extend out from the throat wasn't there. Did you have the time or space to go down even more?

    I like the setting you got this guy in - I love the orange pebbles at bottom, and I like the wet feathers and raised crest. Is this a water setup? P.S. Good title!

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    Was it possible to move further to your left to create more of a profile? Detail and colors are stunning in the body and wing area, but DOF restrictions rendered the head a little soft.

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    Yes, A higher ISO would have been better on this one. Too bad the focus in on the back, though the head and body are angled away anyway. I would also like to see a lower angle.

    Lots of potential here, the technique just needs a little improvement.

    Keep them coming.

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    This was a 30' stream man made on Padre Island at the Bird Conservancy. Couldn't get lower. Green blob is a rock in the backgrn water. Moving to the left was blocked by shrubbry/ All in all I was a rank beginner when I took this picture - trying to remember "everything" - and it didn't work. My reason for submitting this picture is to learn what I should have done. Thanks one and all for your time and consideration.

    Rob............

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    Great find and good behavior captured. I agree with Daniel's suggestions. If the head were parallel to the camera sensor, it would have made it stronger. I would tone down the highlights, they are partially overexposed, negative EC would have helped.

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    Great suggestions and critiques above. Nice natural moment and species.

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