Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Godwit

  1. #1
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Orlando
    Posts
    1,376
    Threads
    213
    Thank You Posts

    Default Godwit

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    I am not at all familiar with this bird. If I haven't rendered the colors correctly let me have it.

    I had lost my pretty light when I found him / her. Taken in the Tampa Bay, Fl. area.

    MKIII,EF 500 @ 1.4x, 1/1600, f/6.3, ISO 400

  2. #2
    Fabs Forns
    Guest

    Default

    Hi Mike, I think the bill is a bit more pink, rather than orange and they are beautiful birds
    I may try a reverse curve to reduce ethe contrast. Composition and wave look good to me :)

  3. #3
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    North Carolina
    Posts
    1,439
    Threads
    47
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I like the composition. I find the little wave appealing that adds just enough environment to give a sense of place without being distracting. Nice low angle of capture. I also like the pose. I will have to relay on Fab's comments on the color as I am not familiar enough with bird to comment. Thanks for sharing.

  4. #4
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Argentina
    Posts
    4,234
    Threads
    215
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    IMO it has too much contrast, but I like the exposure (although I would tone down the bright areas), colors, BG and pose are nice too. Did you ad the ctachlight?
    Congratulations!

  5. #5
    Raul Quinones
    Guest

    Default

    I like at is, I agree with reducing the contrast.
    I will also add just a hair of space on the back of the bird.

  6. #6
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Newton MA, USA
    Posts
    1,956
    Threads
    144
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Other than above I think the pose on the bird is very good, and that rolling wave adds to it.
    Very well positioned to take care of virtual feet too. Nice!

  7. #7
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Bangalore, Karnataka
    Posts
    3,800
    Threads
    236
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Beautiful image Mike.. loved the pose and the off wave adds very well here...

  8. #8
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Great HA, and I like the lazy pose. Lovely pastel colours in the BG, and like the hint of the breaking wave. Well captured.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics