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    Canon 50D
    10-22mm @ 10mm
    1.3 sec, f/16
    Mode: Av
    Metering: Evaluative
    ISO: 100
    AF mode: One-shot AF
    Drive: Single frame shooting
    Self-timer: 2 secs
    White balance: Auto
    Flash: Off
    Taken with Coking filters. No blending here. Straight shot
    All comments & Crits welcome and appreciated
    Last edited by Kobus Tollig; 07-22-2009 at 04:27 PM.

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    For some reason the image did not want to show:confused:

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    Hi Kobus, The light is beautiful and you have chosen a few leading lines ie: the rocks along with the feint waves in front of them that work well. I like the fact that you used 3 boats but would have wished they weren't merging with each other and a bit of the backround....

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    Hi Kobus,
    I'm with Dave on this one and I will add.....if the boats were a little lower in the frame......the large expanse of water between the rocks and the boats would not be as dominant and seperate the image quite as much.

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    Very pleasant view, Kobus. Smooth water waves and the rocks contrast well in the FG and eyes are easily led to the boats and horizon in BG. Great composition. TFS.

    regards,
    ramesh

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    Paul Marcellini
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    Agree with Dave and Roman's suggestions. I like the line of the wave. Well handled exposure.

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    love the light and lines here and agree the boats being totally seperate would have helped a lot. :)
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