
Originally Posted by
Daniel Belasco
Sorry Artie...
You can take harsh critiques so here goes: I don't like it.
It is so beneath the quality of the images I've seen you take. I can't believe you posted this.
I am glad the image was posted. I have never seen a Mockingbird defending its territory.
You mentioned the sea-lion--very distracting. I wouldn't have know what it was unless you said.
Frankly, there was never any question that the bird is in front of a sea lion; for several reasons: 1) the shot is in the Galapagos and Artie has already posted an image of a sea lion; 2) the lion is lying down and the flippers are to the right and behind the bird IMO
I don't like the blurred wing tips, just too much blurr. It would be ok if only the tips.
Dan, the bird is in a defensive protective position. Since I grew up near Hollyweird (Hollywood, Calif), if someone was threatening me with their fingertips/limp wrist, frankly I would not feel very threatened. However, if someone was waiving their arm then I would feel threatened. This is not a Bird On A Stick; this is real life. The Mockingbird is feeling threatened and is responding. It can't respond with a waving of the tips of the wings; it is flapping and letting and indicating a possible attack.
Weird angle. I know technically the bird is level, but the position of the wings make it look strange,
OK, weird is in the eye of the beholder; so is art.
Area around feet looks unnatural. Something, weeds, around right foot.
It's right foot appears obscured by the different sand elevations; it appears to be stamping or raising it's left foot.
Sand or something below the body between the legs is distracting.
Yup; it looks like grains of sand in the air as a result of the action of the left foot and the fanning of the wings.
Light makes the image and the lighting is too harsh. I know it's Galapados and you go when you can and take what you can.
Yup, I agree a bit harsh. So what! Sometimes what you see is what you get, and sometimes it simply is the best there is and shouldn't be dismissed.
I also remember you saying on BAA that you would never go out in the afternoon and shoot in this this kind of light.
"never" is an absolute and frankly if I have learned anything from Artie it is that there are rules in under some circumstances the rules are meant to be broken.
To whom is this shot suppose to appeal to?
ME! and others; that is why we wrote the positive comments that we have. Trust me on this; no one before or after my comment wrote something positive to stroke Artie. That is the last thing Artie wants; and, if he catches you stroking him and not the image truthfully, well.......you won't get a "get out of jail pass."
Sorry, maybe I took the sticky about not saying, "Great shot, Way to Go!" too seriously!
No you didn't; you are entitled to your opinion, and it is better to express your opinion truthfully than to either provide a typical BS "Great Shot", or to say nothing.
Don't worry only one or two people will read this and my next posted image will really get ripped!!
1. Wrong; and 2. only if it is justified!
dan