
Originally Posted by
Bob Blanchard
There are actually two "issues" in this regarding horizon lines. The minor one is the transitional water color band that passes through just above the birds feet. That one is minor, and easily fixed if I wanted to spend the time doing it. The second is the pronounced horizon line where the water and trees come together. The darker shade of the water and the shadows under the trees form a very pronounced line, which are disecting the subject in a distracting place (cutting his wings off). While it may not seem like a big deal, it does distract the eyes from where you want them. Now, if the position of the bird relative to the horizon line were different (if the bird were either completely above the line and against the trees, or below the line against the water) then it might not be so noticable. As it is, about the only way it could have been worse was if it were cutting his head off. I hope that explains it.
I still like the image, and it will probably do fine as a stock image....but it would get killed in a contest entry.