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    Gal Shon
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    Default Lesser Grey Shrike

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    ~ 85% of the original, 20D 400/f5.6
    Iso 200, f7.1, 1/1600, -1
    Feel free to comment and thanks for looking

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    Nice light, exposure and HA. Tack sharp. I don't mind the graduated BG, though I wish the head didn't intersect with it. You might try toning down the perch a bit.

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    I was thinking the same thing about the BG as Aidan. Nice detail and the bonus is the bug. Well done.

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    Although I really like it as presented I have to agree with Aidan suggestion and comment.
    Nice pose, nice exposure, colors and detail, prey in the bill is great plus and comp is very nice.
    Congratulations!

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    I like the prey and the calm BG although I agree with Aidan and the intersection of the BG color line with the bird.
    But this is great as it is.

    Markus

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    I like the pose, light, sharpness and the food item adds to it. I might lighten the eye a bit and the split BG makes it look as if it needs a bit CW rotation but that might be due to the angle.

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    Very nice Gal, Agree with everything that has been said. I might even lighten the bird just a tad overall. Congrats.

    Brian

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    Aidan covered my thoughts on the BG. Otherwise I love the pose and the BG too. I would probably tone down the upright on the perch, though I am at work and things usually appear brighter than normal.

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    Super pose, in stunning light. This is sharp showing good detail, and his food a bonus. The two tone BG doesnt bother me, but I agree to tone down the perch.

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    Super all-round image here Gal, good detail, bg and the food adds to the image...congrats

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